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Jas Nicole's avatar

So so beautiful!!!

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!!🥹🖤

nia | fiction author's avatar

oh this was such a beautiful read

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!! :’)

Baylee Wilcox's avatar

The narration is amazing!! The words become even more beautiful, vivid, and touching.

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!! I’m so glad you enjoyed the narration!! It felt like I was giving her the voice she never had :’)

Baylee Wilcox's avatar

Even recording something in a standard reading voice is hard enough, but to give a character a real voice like this just has to be acknowledged

Every Root, Every Thorn's avatar

Awedome, narration!

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you!! I think I’ll do more of them :)

Felix's avatar

The vivid imagery is harrowing, but not as much the horror of resignation. A wonderful piece, well done.

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!! I’m really glad to hear that the intended emotions have come through!! :’))))

Caroline Beuley's avatar

Beautiful Coral!!

Coral Evermore's avatar

AAAA thank you so much Caroline!!

I won’t lie, I’m lowkey proud of this piece as it felt extremely cathartic for me🥹🖤

Between the Lines's avatar

Magnificent

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!!🖤

Tony McNichol's avatar

Really enjoyed this...Thank you!

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!!🖤

Nimita Kaul's avatar

Amazing!!

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!! :’)

Bradley Hurt's avatar

This was really good!

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!! Glad you enjoyed!! :)

J.M. Gooding's avatar

This is amazing! Great job!!

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!!🖤

Absolutely loved this prompt!! I’ll have to join in again when I can!!

Joshua Bader's avatar

Gorgeous and haunting. Its such a weird mix of poem and prose.

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!! I’ve only done one other prose poem before so tbh I wasn’t sure how the form wasn’t supposed to be? I think I managed to make it a proper prose poem though haha