That is great writing. I hope it’s not all you wrote. That needs to be explored further. If a novel, this sounds like it would be somewhere in the second of three acts.
You ever seen the movie “Bicentennial Man” starring Robin Williams? One of my absolute favorites, if not—check it out. It might give you an idea of what I mean.
Very interesting concept! So cold, but warm at the same time. Loved it!!
Thank you so much!! Glad you enjoyed :)
I absolutely agree!!
Really loved this tale...and I agree; it seems like there's more to tell! Thanks, Coral
Thank you so much!! I’m glad you enjoyed!! I’ve been hearing that this needs to be expanded, perhaps I’ll do that down the line!! :)
self-aware, unable to feel. we must fix him! thanks for the story, quite enjoyed it!
Thank you so much!! I felt bad for him, but he’s also pretty aware of what’s going on haha
That is great writing. I hope it’s not all you wrote. That needs to be explored further. If a novel, this sounds like it would be somewhere in the second of three acts.
Haha sadly, for this specific story and these characters, it is all I wrote. It was a pretty quick write for a prompt I found compelling.
I didn’t realize this had potential beyond its microfiction format. Perhaps I shall revisit it🤔🤔🤔
Thank you so much for reading!!
You ever seen the movie “Bicentennial Man” starring Robin Williams? One of my absolute favorites, if not—check it out. It might give you an idea of what I mean.
And you are very welcome.
Nooooo I haven’t seen that film but now I really want to because love Robin Williams!!
Thank you for the recommendation :)
Please do. You will not be dissatisfied 😁
I would love to see more of this.
To be honest, I hadn’t though of anything beyond this moment. I’m sure it could be expanded, but we shall see🤔
Thank you so much for reading!!🖤
I really liked the musical accompaniment. Really helped supplement the somber, contemplative mood of the piece!
Thank you!! I always try to add ambient music to my stories since I really care about immersion while writing and even while reading!! :)
This makes me think of a modern Pygmalion. Really enjoyed the piece.
Thank you so much!! I could definitely see the connection to Pygmalion. Thanks for reading <3