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Johanna C. Eschwald's avatar

An incredible story. You perfectly captured how some men see a girl's coming of age as corruption. Some of it even reminded me of religious doctrines making women who refuse to live as men's pleasure tools out to be wocked and sinful. Love it!

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Creepy and disturbing and reminiscent of the orgies the aristocrats have in the child abuse network. With the ageing and decay of the statue like the growing older of the child until they are not a child anymore and that's why he gets angry. Then there's the multiple personality alters and the fracturing/dissociation.

You got inside the man's head brilliantly. And showed it's really not a nice place to be.

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