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M. Brandon Robbins's avatar

This took a dark turn. I'd like to see more of the story.

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you!! I do plan on extending this piece at some point. There’s a lot that can be done for it.

quiet nymph 🐚's avatar

your work is so captivating, can’t wait to read this

Coral Evermore's avatar

thank you so much!! I hope you enjoy <333

Eugenia P. Frankenberg πŸ₯€'s avatar

i loved this story, and the power dynamics it reveals; one side has structural power, the other has magical power πŸ”₯

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you so much!! And yes, the power dynamics were very fun to write about. I definitely plan on writing the full story of her revenge though😈

Eugenia P. Frankenberg πŸ₯€'s avatar

β€œNerissa had been ripped open for those little pups who were now destined to be groomed into wolves.” oof. what a line. πŸ”₯

Coral Evermore's avatar

Thank you!! Medea was such a great well of inspiration for this story, but it fun to imagine the story in a different religious/political context where the men boys would be groomed to take power like their father…

Caroline Beuley's avatar

Coral is back!! Loved this as always <3

Coral Evermore's avatar

Yessss, I’m back!! And hopefully able to post semi-regularly!! And thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed this little witchy pieceπŸ–€