Poetry tends to be at its strongest when the images are very strong and precise, when the abstractions are minimized. This is a solid start, but I would encourage you to build on what you have here and develop it further. The strong image is what holds the reader.
Cutting yourself open and baring your insides raw is what you do every time you write. :-)
It is!! That’s what it feels like haha it’s so raw and vicseral.
I loved the line "Tears shall merge with the ocean."
For me that was very evocative.
Thank you so much!! I was definitely in an emotional place when writing this
Those last two lines !!
Those lines felt especially visceral for me!!
I could tell!!
there was a time in my life when i felt like i also had to do this violent awakening. very evocative 🖤
It’s certainly a difficult but ultimately rewarding process…Thank you so much for reading!!🖤🖤🖤
How do you find your music ?
I just look up ambience on YouTube!! There’s a ton on there for specific vibes :)
Poetry tends to be at its strongest when the images are very strong and precise, when the abstractions are minimized. This is a solid start, but I would encourage you to build on what you have here and develop it further. The strong image is what holds the reader.
Yeah, this might be something I return to and expand on. Not sure. But thank you for the solid feedback!! :)