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arushi 💛's avatar

reading this felt like slipping into a world that was already breathing on its own. the way you describe the path, the wind, the vines, and the cave makes everything feel alive and watchful. it is almost like the land itself is a character that both guides and warns. i really like how godwin moves through this space with a mix of fear and determination, and how his longing for the grimoire shapes the entire atmosphere. your writing has this calm kind of tension that pulls me in without overwhelming me. it feels mystical and a little dangerous in the best way. i could see every moment so clearly, and it made me want to know what waits for him after that awakening. you write fantasy with a visual clarity that is rare. this was beautiful to read 🤍

Laura Teodorescu's avatar

Poor Godwin never stood a chance

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